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Tuesday, 12 November 2013

Super Fast Boots

This story starts on a rainy day at school and a little boy. His name is James and he has big hazel eyes, light brown hair, big white teeth, peachy skin.  He is very chubby and has apple red cheeks. James is a nice boy who is friendly, funny and sometimes scared of other people. Some of the  kids like to laugh at James and make fun of him, but others think he is nice and likes to play with him.


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There is one thing about him that no one knows, he has boots that can make him run very fast. He likes to play games with his friends because he knows he can beat them. Physical Education had just finished and it was time to have a shower. When James came back from the shower he got changed. He started to rummage through his locker, and thats when he  realised that his boots were gone!


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The next day he was sitting in the park when a boy named Peter came along. “Hey James, did you lose something?” said Peter, then he started to laugh. James looked down at Peter’s feet and yelled “ GIVE ME BACK MY SHOES!”
“NO”! said Peter. James stood up, he wanted to hurt Peter but he knew that  that would be a bad idea. “Please give me back my shoes Peter.” Said James quitely.
“What are you going to do about it?” said Peter.


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James walked over to Peter and said “ Peter, I will race you for the boots”.
Peter laughed and said “No one can beat me when I have these ultimate fast boots!”
“Just watch me” said James. They both stood up, ready to run. “On your marks, get set, GO!” screamed James. Off they ran, both neck in neck, “How can you run so fast when you have no boots on?” asked Peter. James laughed and said
“I always have a spare pair of boots in my bag, because I knew someone would take mine.” James laughed and ran for the finish line. Peter started to catch up when suddenly Peter pushed James, “I told you I would win” said Peter.
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“There is no way I can win”, thought James. “I have to do something”. He looked down at his boots and saw an ultra fast button that makes him run fast. “THAT’S IT!” James stood up and clicked the button. He automatically started to run fast and sooner enough he caught up to Peter and he won the race. “NNOO I WANT THE SHOES, but I guess I have to give them back, so here.”


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Peter gave the shoes back to James. The next day ,Peter came to school and apologized to James and gave him a box. “What is it?” Asked James.
“Have a look.” said Peter. James opened the box and said “THANK YOU SO MUCH!” said James. Peter gave James a pair of boots that can make him fly, but how long will he have them before someone steals them?


1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great narrative Darrelle! It shows everything a recount should have and it's very imaginative.

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