In The Summertime At Swimarama

On Saturday morning, I went with my friend Faith and her family to Swimarama, because it was her brother, Demetrius's birthday. We had packed our bags and we were ready to go, but then  we realised that there were only two cars which meant there were only eight seats. There were fourteen people so uncle Daniel drove one car with aunty Andrea in the passenger seat .Aramus, Setu and Kayne sat at the back with Payton and Demetrius sitting on Aramus and Kayne’s laps.

Chubby  Heremaia, pretty Honesty and funny Jurri quietly  sat at the back of the second car while nice Aunty Reina peacefully drove and tall Uncle Charlie was in the passenger shiny seat. There was no room left for hungry Faith, hyper Lita and I to fit so we happily asked Lita’s parents to quickly drop us off. When we got there we joyfully hopped in the pool. Fast Aramus, Lita and I had a loud water fight. We quietly asked Faith if she wanted to play but she didn't want to come inside the pool because we weren’t allowed to wear denim shorts into the pool, and she didn't want to take them off.

Lita and I started to beg Faith to come in but she didn’t want to because it was cold. Ten minutes had past before Faith came and sat in the pool with her shorts on. “Faith, you should just take your shorts off because you might get caught by the lifeguard.”

“I’ll just wait for them to tell me to take them off.” Faith said. We all laughed then we had some lunch.

In room 7 we have been learning about adding adverbs, adjectives and verbs. In this story I have added descriptive language to make it more interesting for the audience.